Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Final Evaluation

Evaluation of Film Opening.
I think that generally, our film opening ‘The Unseen’ follows the general conventions of a real film of the horror genre in many ways. My group and I did lots of in depth research and analysis of real film openings of the horror/thriller genre. Looking at genuine media products really helped us in terms of creating a narrative and a story board before we began the production for our project. One film we researched was the opening to The Ring, involving two young girls who are home alone when all of a sudden a creature comes out of the TV and kills one of them. This is very similar to ours as it begins with a young girl, of roughly the same age as the girls in The Ring being killed in her home; juxtaposing the safe environment of a home and in tern, emphasising the impact of the murder. Many horror films also use young girls of roughly the same age as the girl in ours such as The Ring and Sorority Row; this particular genre plays on the naivety and innocence of the stereotype as usually something bad happens to them, which is something we wanted to come across to the audience of our film. Also in many other horror/thriller films we researched, the beginning of the narrative starts with a murder. We used this idea as it is a common convention in a film of this genre and also creates tension straight away and leaves the audience asking questions that they hope will be answered in the following storyline.
Many of the camera shots used in our film are common to those used in professional horror films. An example of this is the establishing shot used at the very beginning of our film to establish the setting. This is also used in Sorority Row; giving the audience a hint as to where the horror will take place. I don’t think our film opening challenges any conventions of a normal horror film in terms of story, setting and camera work. We mainly wanted to use and emphasise the techniques already used in horror/thriller films and I think we were successful.

I think in our film, it emphasises the stereotype of particular social groups; mainly age and gender. The girl in our film is 17 years old which I think is an appropriate age for the actor to be. I think our film emphasises the stereotype of a young adult who is naive and slightly oblivious to the dangers around them. I think if we had chosen an adult to play the part it would not have had the same impact as it would have lacked a sense of innocence; which is a contrast to the horrific situation about to occur. Also because of the age of the girl in the film, the audience feel more sympathy towards this person which is the desired effect we wanted on the people watching. Gender in our film is also represented very stereotypically as it depicts females as fairly helpless and more likely to find themselves in a dangerous situation. If we had used a young boy rather than a girl I don’t think the audience would feel the same sympathy as they would towards a boy, simply because girls in horror films and generally in the media are depicted as the victims whereas males are portrayed as heroes. To get the best audience reaction we wanted to play on the stereotypes already created in the media; therefore we thought that using a young girl would fit the genre, suit the narrative and have a more dramatic effect in terms of sympathy and shock on the audience.

I think the audience for our film would be teenagers and young adults; roughly the same age as the girl in the film. The fact that our audience is aimed at people of the same age as the actress makes the film very relatable; many teenagers are left in their homes on their own and the fact that they can apply it to reality adds tension and thriller for the audience. While receiving feedback from teenagers who we wanted to aim our film at, someone commented “genuinely made my fear of bathroom that'll bit worse”. Young teenagers may have irrational fears that are challenged in horror films which is also something we wanted to achieve to leave the audience in genuine fear. Also perhaps a fear of the dark and being alone are phobias that may challenge the audience in our film. I think that our film both appeals to boys and girls. Girls can probably relate more the narrative where as boys are more interested in the bloody aspect of the film and the fact that part of our film involves a girl in the shower; which is also a common convention used in horror films to attract a male audience as well as female.
While taking part in this project, we used some technology that we were all very familiar with and used some software that none of us had any experience in before. I found using the video camera fairly easy as I have used technology similar to this in the past, after a few times of using it and becoming more comfortable with it I was very confident when using it to film. The only consistent difficulty we had was attaching it to the tripod as sometimes it became lose but we soon overcame that as well. To edit our film footage, we used a software called imovie and worked on Apple Macs. This was a new experience for all of us as we had never used one or the software on it before. We found the Macs easy to use however at first imovie proved to be fairly challenging for us. We found it difficult to add effects at first and soundtrack as we did not know how to import sound or add the effects available on imovie. However with the help of our teacher we became more aware and comfortable with the software as time went on and found the right effects and soundtrack to fit the horror genre. The aspect that we found most challenging of all was uploading our footage on the camera to imovie. When filming, the footage saved to the internal memory of the camera rather than the memory card we used, when we realised this was the reason we were unable to upload the film we had to move the files from the camera to the memory card and did this every time we filmed something new.

I think our film would be distributed by corporations such as Lions Gate entertainment. This company has a reputation of distributing films and television series mainly of the horror/thriller genre. Lions Gate has also distributed films such as Saw, Hostel and My Bloody Valentine. All of these films are of the horror genre and similar to our film opening. I think Lions Gate however aim their films at a more older, mature audience as some films such as Saw are very gory and not suitable for a younger audience; therefore maybe not appropriate for some of the teenagers our film is aimed at. I think if people are going to watch a film/TV series produced by Lions Gate, they have a general; idea of the genre and the content that will be in the film or television show. Our film meets these expectations and think ‘The Unseen’ is a film this company would be interested in distributing.

I believe that since producing our preliminary task, we have gained so much knowledge. When filming our preliminary task, many aspects went wrong and we were completely un-aware of how time consuming the filming and editing process is. We also did not plan our preliminary task very effectively and filmed without a story board or script. When it came to filming our main task, we wanted to ensure we were much more organised and left plenty of time before the deadline to edit the footage we had in case we needed to re film anything. We also learnt that for our main task we shouldn’t have much dialogue or acting because if this was not portrayed effectively, it may ruin the tension built up through soundtrack and other various techniques. We decided to not have any dialogue, as in many horror films conversation between people only occur at times when not much tension is built up. Also when producing our preliminary task, we did not spend much time editing or re-filming and parts that were not effective. For our main task we spent hours editing and re-filmed some parts countless times until we were a hundred percent happy with the content.

Overall I have thoroughly enjoyed all aspects of this project, including the planning and research. Horror films are of great interest to me and filming and editing my own was a very exciting experience. The feedback we received from Facebook and Youtube was generally very positive and appealed to our target audience; some were also very scared which proves our film had our desired effect on the audience. One piece of feed back that suggested improvement was that the girl in the film should have not worn bracelets in the shower scene, as in some shots she has more bracelets on than in others. Apart from this continuity error everyone else seemed to enjoy our film and couldn’t find any major faults with it. I think that our hard work has paid off and our final outcome was worth the hard work.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJ2ucTCg-sA&feature=youtu.be

This is a link to our finished film opening 'The Unseen'. This is very different to our original narative and story board but overall my group and I are very happy with the finished outcome. We feel we have worked extremely hard on it over the past few months planning, filming and producing and overall the feedback so far has been very positive.

Change in Narrative...

After much deliberation, we have decided to change the narrative of our story. Originally our story was based on a girl walking through an alley, having a flashback and then murdered by an anonymous stalker. However after several attempts of filming in the dark we have decided the lighting is a major issue and have changed the story to a young girl being in her house alone, and an anonymous man breaks in and murders her in the shower. We feel this would be much more appropriate as we will be able to film much more often rather than waiting until it is dark. Also the artificial light inside the house will look much more effective and professional in the film. We have also tried to edit the lighting on imovie however this also did not prove as effective as we would have liked.
We have re scripted our film and have changed the title from 'After Midnight' to 'The Unseen' to fit the narrative. This was our original script for 'After Midnight'...

Script ‘After Midnight’

Start with an extreme long shot of the surroundings followed by a variety of shots of the area, credits will be small and white that will fade in and out as the shots change. Photo shots throughout the entire start.
Order of events . . .

1) Girl walking down alley/street

2) Gets paranoid, looks scared, fast head movements- looking around her and behind.

3) Flashback of her in the mirror: seeing writing on steamed up mirror. Girl is ‘humming’ in the shower.

4) Back to her staring at writing in alley.

5) Girl answers phone ‘hello?’. Anon answers ‘Don’t stay out after midnight’. Then a blackout and ‘After midnight’ appears.

6) Final shot of girl’s hand and phone on the floor, then blackout.
Certain shots in this script have not worked, despite our efforts. The only part that looked professional was the shots of the girl in the shower and this was due to the artificial light. The setting was far too dark to shoot the shot of the girl's hand and shots of her walking down the alley. We have now re-scripted and planned a new story for our new idea of 'The Unseen'...
Script ‘The Unseen'.
Start with an establishing shot of outside of the house to set the scene, telling the audience where the action/murder will take place. Variety of long/mid shots of the the girl sitting inside watching TV and close/mid shots of the man inside his car watching the house. 
  1.  Girl sitting watching TV, while man is watching the house from his car.
  2. POV shot of the man walking into the house, opening the door and walking through the house.
  3. Girl stops TV and walks out of room to the bathroom. Shot of man walking up the stairs
  4. POV shot of man looking through her things in her bedroom. Shots of of girl in the shower are dotted around this part. Soundtrack throughout so far is deep, quiet music to create suspense.
  5. Soundtrack changes to something much louder and intense, POV shot of man picking up scissors in her room.
  6. Man begins to walk downstairs, straight cuts between girl in the shower and him walking.
  7. Close up of door unlocking as man walks into bathroom, mid shot of girl as she turns around and screams then a blackout.
  8. Fade from black to a shot of blood in the plug hole, then sound effect of camera taking a photo as photos of the girls dead body is shown.
  9. Screen is black with just the sound of foot steps 'murderer walking away from crime'. Title appears in read 'The Unseen' then face to black.

Wednesday, 29 February 2012

Friday, 10 February 2012

http://eleishaasmedia.blogspot.com/2012/01/preliminary-task-script.html

This is a link to our preliminary task that we worked on in practice before producing our main task. This helped us become familiar with the equipment, software used to edit and the amount of time needed to film and edit a movie. Our preliminary task is about a girl going to see a counsellor, this story also links in with the storyline we plan to use for our main task. I think the first few shots of the mid-shot of my legs and the close up of the hand knocking on the door is effective as it creates and makes the audience aprehensive as we do not know yet who this person is; it creates ambiguity. Also the two shot of the counsellor and I sitting across the table from eachother is effective also as it establishes the character's relationship. I think these aspects of the preliminary task were successful however I think there is still a lot we could have improved. I think the close up of my face after i knock on the counsellors door could have been effective as it displays the nervous emotion on my face, however the camers is slightly shakey and therefor doesn't look proffessional. We have learnt from this and when we come to film our main task we will always use a tri-pod when filming still shots. There is also a continuity error when the councellor opens the door and i enter the room., In the next shot the counsellor is sitting in his seat; we did not leave enough time for him to sit down. This makes the film look inrealistic and glitchy. We found the editing software, imovie fairly easy to use, however we did experience trouble in uploading it to a mac computer. Now we are more familiar with the technology we will take this on board for our main task and ensure we have a backup of the film on a memory card so it is easier to upload.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4e4DBZ_eeGg






This is another film opening we have looked at for our research, This clip again has given us many ideas.

Wednesday, 8 February 2012

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tn_DjzN8410

A nightmare on elms street is a very old film so the editing isnt going to be as modern as most current films. It begins with extreme close ups of someones hands who is making a new set of gloves. Fire and many different tools are used. Without seeing who the character is, it creates tension as to what this person is going to do with the gloves. Also the use of gloves in horror films relates to the idea of a possible murder? After the knifes on the gloves are shown,  the title bursts through and stops it. The colours used are black red and white, which are the conventonal colours of a horror as these colours connotate ideas such as darkness and gore. After the title, the woman character is shown and she is purely against a white background. At the time this was made this is the simple the edit that they could use. Although it is effective as you focus purely on her and her emotions. After this we see her running through a dark corridor, and shes running from the white room she was previously in. The extreme long shot gets in her running with the corridor, its important for the auidence to see what shes doing, also we see the dark surroundings and her small figure in the distance; this makes her character seem timid and insignificant.   The goat that runs out on her is incredibly random but makes the auidence jump as they are on edge. The contrast of white and black occurs throughout, could white mean the way out?